But will it be enough to hook readers?
Run the Gauntlet (RTG) is a free monthly program where one lucky writer receives a developmental edit of their opening scenes. The feedback is recorded in real-time, on-screen and then posted publicly so that other writers can share in the insights garnered.
In this live critique:
A big thanks to Jessica Manko for sharing her wonderful work of sci-fi suspense. I picked Jessica‘s project because it starts with a riveting premise, but is it enough to grip readers? The following critique raises some interesting questions:
- How to utilize interior monologue to add subtext, variety, and nuance to your dialogue.
- Working with multiple points of view.
- Finding the balance between important context and world-building, versus character development.
View a PDF copy of the edited scenes and comments featured in this episode.
Would you like to Run the Gauntlet?
Submit your scenes to RTG and if you’re selected, you’ll receive a free developmental edit.
Special offer
Alternatively, I have a special offer for those who’d prefer a private assessment of their opening scenes. This offer includes a discount off my regular fee and is exclusive to my Run the Gauntlet audience.
What did you think of Jessica’s scenes and the feedback offered?
We’d love to hear your constructive comments below!