But what’s the creative strategy, behind the words?
Run the Gauntlet (RTG) is a free monthly program where one lucky writer receives a developmental edit of their opening scenes. The feedback is recorded in real-time, on-screen and then posted publicly so that other writers can share in the insights garnered.
In this live critique:
A big thanks to Roberta for sharing her wonderful work of prehistoric fiction. “Destiny of the Soul” introduces us to Ka’ala, an ancient tribeswoman caught in a fight for her life. The scene has a lot to deliver, with loads of world-building, description, drama, and action.
This episode of RTG looks at:
- How to utilize description to create context, illuminate a setting, and foreshadow trouble to come.
- Finding the balance between important context, versus overwhelming the reader with too much information.
- Effective use of interior monologue.
- Using tone to build tension in your scene.
View a PDF copy of the edited scenes and comments featured in this episode.
Would you like to Run the Gauntlet?
Submit your scenes to RTG and if you’re selected, you’ll receive a free developmental edit.
Special offer
Alternatively, I have a special offer for those who’d prefer a private assessment of their opening scenes. This offer includes a discount off my regular fee and is exclusive to my Run the Gauntlet audience.
What did you think of Roberta’s scenes and the feedback offered?
We’d love to hear your constructive comments below!