In this episode, it’s “Lights, Character, Action!”
Run the Gauntlet (RTG) is a free monthly program where one lucky writer receives a developmental edit of their opening scenes. The feedback is recorded in real-time, on-screen and then posted publicly so that other writers can share in the insights garnered.
In this live critique:
A big thanks to Ruth for sharing the opening scenes of her crime fiction. “Hot Rocks” introduces us to Leigh, a police officer who is about to make a horrific discovery. The scene has a lot to deliver, with significant moments of tension, action, and grief.
This episode of RTG looks at:
- Finding the balance between important context, versus overwhelming the reader with too much detail.
- Weaving insights into the scene that allow us to empathize with the character before the action consumes all our focus.
View a PDF copy of the edited scenes and comments featured in this episode.
Would you like to Run the Gauntlet?
Submit your scenes to RTG and if you’re selected, you’ll receive a free developmental edit.
Special offer
Alternatively, I have a special offer for those who’d prefer a private assessment of their opening scenes. This offer includes a discount off my regular fee and is exclusive to my Run the Gauntlet audience.
What did you think of Ruth’s scenes and the feedback offered?
We’d love to hear your constructive comments below!