In this episode, we meet a young woman in big trouble…
Run the Gauntlet (RTG) is a free program where courageous writers submit their opening scenes for live developmental review. The feedback is recorded in real-time, on-screen, and then posted publicly so that we can all share in the insights garnered.
In this live critique:
A big thanks to Denise Senecal for sharing the opening scenes of her Civil War historical “A Long Way Home”, where we meet Abbie, a hardworking young woman in the throes of young love, and the cross-hairs of catastrophe…
This episode of RTG discusses:
- The difference between prologues, and first chapters.
- Creating character depth in the midst of high action.
- Adding clarity to blocking and action.
Would you like to Run the Gauntlet?
Submit your scenes to RTG and if you’re selected, you’ll receive a free developmental edit.
Special offer
Alternatively, I have a special offer for those who’d prefer a private assessment of their opening scenes. This offer includes a special discount, exclusive to my Run the Gauntlet audience.
What did you think of the insights and topics discussed?
We’d love to hear your constructive comments below!